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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2007-06-14 08:13 PM

Rewrite:

A Buda’s Smile

There is a time each day or night
A part of me just takes to flight
And I become a phantoms wile
And be a Buda with a smile

Surrounded by impressions spill
The glories of a fancy will
I make a Shangri-la for two
A spirited I and ghost of you

We fly about as butterflies
Under an emeralds golden sky
Drink a draught of forbidden tea
With out a thought of what will be

We dance and play upon a shore
With blooms of flowers evermore
We play the game of ecstasy
With abandons intimacy

And scoff at past’s reality
A world away we cannot see

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-06-14 09:59 PM

Now, I am trying to imagine an image
of a little Budda-Sy...

and if you sit still long enough,
I will rub your belly for good luck!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2007-06-14 10:09 PM

Sunshine
Thank you dear I'd enjoy that.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2007-06-14 11:11 PM

You have no idea how much I enjoy your poetry.

Thank you.
A

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2007-06-15 12:38 PM

Just beautiful, Sy. Your poetry is always a pleasure to read.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2007-06-15 12:40 PM

you have a fantastical way of making your words sing and bounce

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2007-06-15 07:52 AM

aziza,
You have no Idea how much I enjoy your comments.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2007-06-15 07:53 AM

SmartChick,
You are a dear.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2007-06-15 07:55 AM

SEA
And your replies make me sing and bounce.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

9 posted 2007-06-15 06:46 PM

interesting 'write' (I had not seen the
original version...)

I would like to find some of that
'forbidden tea'...particularly if
it allows for forgetting those 'past
realities' and playing that game of
ecstasy!'

Applause!!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2007-06-15 08:10 PM

secondhanddreampoet
That tea was left to me by my great grandfather and he never left me the formula. LOL Thanks for the read.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2007-06-15 09:02 PM

"And I become a phantoms wile
And be a Buda with a smile

Surrounded by impressions spill
The glories of a fancy will
I make a Shangri-la for two
A spirited I and ghost of you

We fly about as butterflies
Under an emeralds golden sky
Drink a draught of forbidden tea
With out a thought of what will be"
____________________________________

Sure sounds like two soulmates to me!.....Delightful, bubbly and beautiful thoughts here......Good to read you again Sy

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

passing shadows
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12 posted 2007-06-15 09:08 PM

glad I had a bit of time to read you

I've been missing my Sy time

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2007-06-15 10:13 PM

Honeybee
Love your relpy.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2007-06-15 10:14 PM

passing,
And I missed you.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

15 posted 2007-06-16 12:04 PM

Sir, this is beautiful one and it has wonderful imagination. I have read several times but did not post because i was fighting with those "Rebel"s back there in the local.

love to read your poem as always

have a wonderful morning and a great weekend!!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2007-06-16 10:10 AM

Drauntz
A large thanks for your sincere replies.

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