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Poets' Hill (Cemetery) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Poets' Hill (Cemetery) Under a melancholy moon as the evening mist lies weeping, mid ruined stones and impatient sorrow only Time dances with shadows; and no one is left…even to wonder 'why they were’ or what might have ‘mattered’, between the “nothing to nothing” from whence they came…to return… all the poor and disenfranchised (when their 'poetry' died) so alone and forgotten! ** I hope that anyone who reads this humble 'write' will also choose to read the REALLY fine and important work by 'WindWalker': /pip/Forum103/HTML/003425.html ~ [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (06-15-2007 09:23 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Enjoyed what you had to say. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Your work reminds me of the role artists often play as a true voice of society. In this writing, especially rich imagery: "as the evening mist lies weeping, mid ruined stones and impatient sorrow only Time dances with shadows; " |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and truly a philosophical poem. a beauty as always |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Secondhanddreampoet, The idea is there. However, the writing is a little complex with all the ellipses and double and single quotation marks. In addition, why capitalize "time". I'd try to keep it simple. Bobby |
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