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After The Rain
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After The Rain |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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I never got the chance to look in your eyes before the storm came rushing through and washed away whatever feeling I had in my heart for you. Chances are, you probably lied but that's okay, most men do. Now I guess you'll never know, though I don't think you had a clue. After the rain such a bittersweet view. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
lying man is cheap. shall drop even he comes with money and other bonus. nice poem of clear mind. beautiful enjoyed |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
The eyes never lie Dixie... nice write RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, the rain truly does have a way of cleansing the air and clarifying our view. May all your future vistas, be glorious ones!   Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I don't think lying is O.K...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
aahhh Dixie a bittersweet view indeed... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a grand-fine 'write'! [but, I do think 'generalizations' about ANY segment of 'humanity' are dangerous!: ("most.... 'whomever'....do 'whatever'!"...)] applause! |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Love the imagery in this. A very sad but good poem. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The wonderful thing about the rain is that it is so cleansing Dix....  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Still . .. shades Of Sara Teasdale John . |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Most might lie Dixie, but there are a lot that do not and would not, everyone has their way and day. Happiness and love, we all would near die for, chances are for trying and then comes the truth of love and the commitment of those that are meant to be. We all live our own tests and live with our own mistakes. Lucky for us, we have many chances to get it right. Have a great day Dixie and remember love might be just around the next corner. Take care. Rick |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 I like this one. It's short, which adds to its power. The air of disillusionment is done perfectly.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Your writing never fails to move me. Thank you for sharing you Alison |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
You always know just how to say what you feel. I stand willingly within your shadow forever. ~Lil' Sis~ "I used to worry what people thought of me, then I broke through my cacoon" |
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