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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2007-06-14 07:25 PM






I missed you today
in those moments
that can only belong to you
there, in those private places
of my heart

Sacred emotions
I let no one else touch
~how could I?
they are drenched
in your smile
and that way you have
of saying my name
just so….

I missed you today,
and I wanted to tell you
I love you
more than you’ll ever know


~SEA~


© Copyright 2007 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-06-14 07:40 PM


It's good to see your muse return...

now, where can I go for a good pedicure?




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2 posted 2007-06-14 08:14 PM


Simply
beautifully
lovely

A

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2007-06-14 08:40 PM


Lovely Susan~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

HopeS
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4 posted 2007-06-15 01:19 AM


Awww this was so touching

Hope

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5 posted 2007-06-15 01:47 AM


No one does it quite the way you do that's for dang sure.
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6 posted 2007-06-15 08:50 AM


OhSweetSEAGirl~
So MANY times you write my heart~

How could one not feel the aching beauty of this ?
Easy to answer ... they can't~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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state of mind
7 posted 2007-06-15 09:11 AM


Nice
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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8 posted 2007-06-15 11:02 AM


gawd Susan! You give me goosebumps!

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9 posted 2007-06-15 11:23 AM


magnificant words, truly beautiful
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10 posted 2007-06-15 03:59 PM


Lovely write, Sea... if only I could express as honestly as that.
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11 posted 2007-06-15 06:15 PM


simply superb!

grand-fine 'write'...wonderful 'read'!

much applause!!

Honeybee
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12 posted 2007-06-15 09:04 PM



*sighs*
LOVE this!!!

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

SEA
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13 posted 2007-06-16 10:24 AM


thank you all so very much.

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