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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2007-06-14 08:40 AM

As the sun goes down
I think of you
And, all those things
We use to do

Promises were made
Together you and I
Would always be
Until the end of time

Oh, how I miss those days
When things were good
The times when with you
I knew just where I stood

Sometimes, it feels as if
All these lonely days
Will surely kill me
It seems they're here to stay

I force myself to get out of bed
Just to face another lonely day
Pushing myself to continue
Hoping, loneliness goes away

Once again, I tell myself
Tomorrow is a brand new day
Never give in to defeat for
Something new may come my way

6-14-07

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-06-14 08:49 AM

"Once again, I tell myself
Tomorrow is a brand new day
Never give in to defeat for
Something new may come my way"

gotta keep that hope!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-14 01:30 PM

powerful and brave and strength and high spirit.

good and beautiful

enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-06-14 06:27 PM

I know how you feel

positive ending verse

I like it

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2007-06-14 07:37 PM

There's a lot of strength in this,
and especially when you know you CAN
stand on your own!

Well done, Sue.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2007-06-15 03:14 AM

Sue , I often feel this way , but we have to keep positive , knowing tomorrow is a brand new day , I wrote this below in a previous poem

Around every corner
Hopeful I shall always be
As a new day opens
With the future yet to see

Hugs Hope

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-06-15 06:51 PM

this 'write' is a fine dusting of that 'eternally wellspring of hope' message
... sprinkled on all of us who might need it this very day!

applause!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2007-06-15 09:55 PM

OhSweetSue~
The times of remembering the 'when' of it all leaves such a poignant penning~

Tomorrow ... and tomorrow and tomorrow ... there arises new hope~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2007-06-15 11:15 PM

Wonderfully positive sentiments to keep one moving forward. Well done, Sue. Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2007-06-16 02:47 AM

Thank you all, for stopping by to read a piece of my heart.

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