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Open Poetry #40
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MIcountrygirl79
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since 2007-06-13
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0 posted 2007-06-15 07:05 PM


Frozen

Days come and go as snow falls to the ground,
Melting into tears upon my window.
Land and water freeze in the cold
As does my heart.
The promise of sunshine to come means nothing,
Just more empty promises.
I've heard them before.
© Copyright 2007 Elizabeth - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-06-15 09:10 PM

me too


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-06-15 11:51 PM

beautiful

"Days come and go as snow falls to the ground,Melting into tears upon my window."....beautiful


enjoyed
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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3 posted 2007-06-16 02:33 AM

This is good.

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