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Today’s Needs I Need
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Today’s Needs I Need |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Today’s Needs I Need I need a heart hug A reach in and squeeze me tight hug An envelope me in your arms hug It’s cold today I need some warm love Some touch me and pull me close love A bit of cuddle close love It’s gray today I need a deep, long kiss A sensations rain upon my skin kiss A lose me in your lips kiss It’s damp today I need an us day A watch the clouds part to show the sun day A chase the blues away day It’s time today … Alison [This message has been edited by aziza (06-14-2007 02:07 AM).] |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Oooooohhh sweetness. These are the reads I like. |
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the concrete rose Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 33 |
And enjoyable description of what should be there and what one wants and needs. Exquisite desires, not so much to ask for. Lovely read, I enjoyed a lot. Cheers. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhha! I like this very much!  |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
I think I needed to read this poem today! Thanks |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Topheth Thank you and it so nice to meet you. I have been working with different styles of poetry, but these are the kind I love to write .. I am enjoying reading your work too. aziza ---- the concrete rose It's nice to meet you too. Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I am off to read some of yours in a bit. A --- SEA I am feeling like I am getting to know you a bit and that is a lovely feeling. Thank you for reading. Alison --- RougeandPoet Thanks for reading when you needed to read it and for responding with a little message. Nice to meet you. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, soft side woman here, enjoyed it |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Alison, how I personally know this....sending hugs m'friend. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
a: this is a lovely expression from deep in your heart. ~k |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
James Thank you much. A --- Dark Glad you see the softer side. Thank you for reading - and responding. A --- Gentle Spirit The hug was received and treasured. So is the friendship. Thank you. Alison --- Kahill Yep, it's a heart on my sleeve. Thank you for reading and understanding. Alison |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Ali, you are beautiful *smiles* There has definitely been a change in your writing, I love watching you blossom and I love you Sheli By words the mind is winged |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
read it yesterday. this is very beautiful and it is not your common style. But it is beautiful. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it  love it |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Sheli Thank you, dahlink. I got a helluva deal when we became friends. Love you. zi ---- Drauntz Thank you. If I have a style, this is actually more true to any that I would have. I have played with different types of poetry and with writing different styles - but this is probably the style that fits me the best. Thank you for reading and commenting. You often make me smile with the kindness you show. A --- passing shadows Thank you. I am an admirer of your work - so your thoughts mean a lot to me. A |
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