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SummerSized Triolet
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SummerSized Triolet |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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SummerSized  Summer sounds of katydids and bees Sighing a summer’s breeze through the pines A butterfly lights, a model for me Summer sounds of katydids and bees I sink to the ground to kneel on my knees To know that this moment is briefly mine Summer sounds of katydids and bees Sighing a summer’s breeze through the pines |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely poetry from a lovely lady. Thank you for being a source of inspiration. Alison |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very lovely style and beautiful. enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
wow- beautiful! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Loved this, so peaceful, colorful and alive with a freshness.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! very hopeful feeling I get |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most pleasant 'photo-image' and poetic imagery! sustained applause!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Love it, SIL!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
summer's song is lilting when sung with your pen Karilea... and the butterfly... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Most Triolets I've seen are thin and empty, virtually greeting card verse....this on the other hand is very much a, um, flush Triolet! ....slightly sorry (but only slightly!)....dyslexia will do that to ya..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Karilea ... wonderful form and wonderful visuals. Very much enjoyed.  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, you do some amazing things with words enjoyed you ms |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You do these triolets very well. |
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