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RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon

0 posted 2007-06-13 04:32 PM


Count Me In

I’ve no passion for
   the spotlight, it’s not
   wealth that I desire,
But the game is on
   so why not dip
   my feet into the fire.


For I won’t burn
   I might face ridicule -
   but everyone gets that,
And so I’d rather be
   out on the field
   and give myself a chance.


And if I lose
   so what - that happens,
   I can always try again
I can lose
   a hundred-thousand times
   but if just once I win –


Then I’m a champion
   a hero true
   a man who risked it all
So count me in
   I think its winning time
   and I’m ready for the ball.


© Copyright 2007 John Eyler - All Rights Reserved
MIcountrygirl79
Junior Member
since 2007-06-13
Posts 16
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-06-13 04:36 PM


Wonderful!  And just when I felt like quitting... Funny how fate shows you that you're not done yet!
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-13 07:23 PM


powerful and strong. menly

enjoyed.



the concrete rose
Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 33

3 posted 2007-06-13 07:28 PM


If at first you don't suceed, try and try again. right to the burning end.

Exquisite, had fun reading this poem and understanding how much and it can relate so others.
Cheers.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2007-06-14 01:45 AM


Sometimes we lose , other times we might win , wonderful positive attitude is saying each day "count me in

Hope

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2007-06-14 02:49 AM


Not only do I count you in
---
I want to be on your team!

Good poem
It's nice to meet you here on the boards of PiP.

A

RogueandPoet
Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon
6 posted 2007-06-14 03:14 PM


Thanks all for giving me a read. I'm new to this site but truly loving the experience. I've been a "lone" poet for some time and the ability to share my poems and be enriched by the  poems I read here is wonderful. Pleasure to meet you too!
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