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somethin bout judgment
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somethin bout judgment |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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somethin bout judgment Amulet stone density Plucking light froze in her mind In a hurricane lantern reality Through a world of white pillars As planets ad-lib With strong smooth muscles About a judgment & its penalties She can neither straighten Or scratch canyons to find That enforced kind of dilemma But she knows like an Involuntary reflex Her high-ended inexperience Stickler for his health Martyrs finish last When septic blame incisions eyesight A stealth fully forged within spores Stumbling up steps He is drunk again Like headlights in the rain Words appear in a book That he hasn’t yet read While giving sermons of Precise with nothing inside Considerations are not his focus The war within sentences his moments Free range entrepreneur steals indecency By choice, the centerfold furnishes love Perhaps quit impeached, perhaps not It is best to allow a painter’s syntax With emptiness and daydreams I close my eyes Hoping he might locate his mother’s good mornings she hears a train whistle in the distance nudging the words 10 years 10 years By LeeJ © 2004 LeeJ (All rights reserved) |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
another beautiful piece. enjoyed |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You are breaking my heart. But I do enjoy your thoughts. Your deep emotion in your words. JL  "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - I have to admit to being a bit confused but that's just me and it doesn't in any way take away the enjoyment I always find in your words. Thank you! |
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