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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you went the normal way down around the corner with signs a bit slower at first then faster just before the breaking of metal sounds I heard the dogs barking and there was tree there too doing it's thing with sundowns and a boy stopped his thoughts to feel the empty of the sky when you slipped through between the folds and the wrappers like you had a key to heaven but didn't know the way until you found it at that moment and went on ahead of my leaving just to see if it was like dreams with nothing on the other side except not being awake anymore and wearing jeans with worn cuffs barefoot where our empty had been ____________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and there was tree there too doing it's thing with sundowns and a boy stopped his thoughts to feel the empty of the sky ___________________________________ and when this boys thoughts turns into poetry we are all, so very blessed.  That sundown, sure looks good from here big d. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow, Dark.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If and whenever you write a poem that doesn't make me jerk, tear up, or just say... then you will know you've lost your touch. And I don't think you'll ever lose your touch. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love it when you're around |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
nope, he won't ever loose his touch... he is, magic.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you lady friend ____________ donna girl thank you for the eyes _____________ kahlil, you bless me thanks ___________ dixie, thanks for coming by and touching _________ suesea, you got mail and a thank you |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Daark, I truly admire your usage of the language to tell your stories. In all that I have read, yours' remains quite unique. You have a flair that connects the reader to the subject through abstracts not normally drawn, the end result being quite outstanding. Doc |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
most humble thanx DR |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love how your poems take me with you on your word journies. Thank you. This is wonderful writing. A |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
It's been a while since I have been on here!! I started classes on line so I have been really busy!! Good to see you haven't lost your inspiration!!!  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very very nice Mr Daark! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ladies you bless me |
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