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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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calico gravel with wind wine and a lean back on old wooden it is good for the back and belly to press on the names in hebrew or the splinters of kanagroo kanji over the skin and over tattoos places for the fingers later when the gypsy takes donations from a stranger man in denim and wears his shadow on her bosom while shunning his eyes lest he see her soul seam tear and offer to mend it with wire lies ______________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 like this |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lest he see her soul seam tear  you, sir, are magic Soul sooth, indeed.... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'mend it with wire lies' --that's the part that stands out, to me. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Your writing is a good brain workout in the morning. I didn't know I had these pictures in my head... I look forward to reading you. ~k |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stick around a bit longer than usual, k? I love it when you're here yaknow? |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
"when the gypsy takes donations from a stranger man in denim and wears his shadow on her bosom while shunning his eyes lest he see her soul seam tear and offer to mend it with wire lies" While I admit your imagery escapes me sometimes, these wonderful lines felt good and solid and hit me in the gut. |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Yet another magical poem. Thank you for sharing your work. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks to each of you..am pleased that my words were worth your time |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I have related to your poetry more than once...thank you Dark Stranger! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You write magic. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm...lovely words... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ladies |
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