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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I'm not sure why, but here of late I've not been able to concentrate. My thoughts spin round, return to you out there, somewhere, while I'm here blue. I miss your touch, I miss your smile; the soft of your voice crossed the miles. Your happiness is my hearts desire. I can't forget the flame, the feel of fire; and I force myself not to want but those brown eyes? Oh how they haunt. Forgive me for speaking these feelings true I feel alone, and I'm missing you. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so very good. a feeling can not be hide. we all want love. good. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
well done, hope the person knows, for they are lucky to be your subject. Gloom |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful flow Gentle Spirit ... the sense of longing and want comes through beautifully. Much enjoyed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Pleasantly put.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each, for leaving your words and thoughts here today.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there are certain people we just never stop missing  again, looking in the mirror |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A beauty! JL "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Very beautiful. I enjoyed this poem |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dixie, JL, Jenna, thank you each. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
smooth, fine 'Romanticism'... [touching, powerfully emotive!] much applause! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You have spoken my heart here. |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
A beautifully versed expression of longing and missing someone. This brought a peace to my heart as I am sitting here missing someone now. Helped me. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Gentle Spirit, You write those spinning thoughts so well! Excellent rendering of feeling! I'm saving this beauti! miscellanea |
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