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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
Blue waters flow, from the hills to below, flowing past trees, flowers, and gardens with peas. Still going by there's now smoke in the sky closer and closer the river does get picking up pace bit by bit Winding and turning, while the wild fire's burning Trees crashing down on the innocent town People are screaming while the fire is gleaming building with rage as it kills the poor sage bright orange and red some animals still in bed. They need to hurry before they fell fire's fury. Too late for them, and the flower and it's stem. They're gone, they're dead, No more to be said. Water now drops on all the tree tops, coming to it's last fire and water both pass. The fire becomes still no longer to kill, the haze is ascending, and the water's path ending. [This message has been edited by MegMeg (06-14-2007 01:05 AM).] |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
i don't want to call it the river though. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Running enjoyed. i love to name my write with "no title" to rid the trouble of struggling for a title. |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Moody7!? Okay, I jest.  |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
This is near to my heart, I live where 600,000 acres is burnt and still burning. The only title I can think of is, "Anew". God takes away and then replenishes. May not help, but I really enjoyed reading this. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Milieu JL  "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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