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Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2007-06-10 02:05 PM

To dance within a doubled rainbow,
arms stretched upward
encircling the cobalt-canvas sky,
lips poised to receive the taste
of a lover's kiss
offered 'neath the finest morning mist,
a tongued-delight to be savored slowly;
to breathe deeply of absolute purity,
inhale the sweetened air
of water in fall,
two hearts
enraptured
listening to pristine stream's
cascading song...

this, is how two hearts beat
in synchronicity,
rhythm and rhyme,
beyond all constraints
of space and time
embracing
the magic muse,

Poesie
[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-10-2007 06:59 PM).]

RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

1 posted 2007-06-10 02:26 PM

Some magic in these verses!

Kit McCallum

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Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2007-06-10 04:09 PM

Oh my ... that was absolutely lovely Midnightsun. Beautiful imagery here. Very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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3 posted 2007-06-10 04:17 PM

This is most lovely.
I'll be keeping my eyes open

for rainbows.

A

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2007-06-10 04:39 PM

a grand-magnificent 'write' in the purest spirit of
fine 'Romanticism' and 'idealism'!

I especially loved:

"this, is how two hearts beat
in synchronicity,
rhythm and rhyme,
beyond all constraints
of space and time"

a long-sustained 'standing ovation'!!

The Lady
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The Southwest

5 posted 2007-06-10 11:15 PM

beautiful Kacy

passing shadows
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displaced

6 posted 2007-06-12 05:03 AM

a beauty

love this

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

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Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-06-12 02:30 PM

beautiful write as always

"To dance within a doubled rainbow,
arms stretched upward
encircling the cobalt-canvas sky,
lips poised to receive the taste
of a lover's kiss"....melted me. so beautiful.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

8 posted 2007-06-12 06:28 PM

Well this is a very special poem here Kacy...like salt spray sea water on your face in a gentle wind, it refreshes the soul..thank you for its beauty and your skill..

Goldenrose.

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2007-06-13 09:51 AM

what Phil said....yes...Kacy? This is beyond lovely and anything I could ever hope to compose.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

10 posted 2007-06-13 08:31 PM

Special, oh so special....

especially when you've done so...

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

11 posted 2007-06-15 08:39 PM

WOW, I really like this one!!!!!!!!!!

miscellanea
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OH

12 posted 2007-06-16 06:06 PM

to dance within a doubled rainbow--- what a vision you've painted, Midnitesun! Love it!

miscellanea

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