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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2007-06-12 12:47 PM


    
Artist: Donald Schmit

I Will
~ Linda L. Dowd ~

As river flows to endless sea,
~ I will follow you.
As high as carefree eagles fly,
~ I will soar with you.
As ocean tides roll in and out,
~ I will ebb ‘n flow with you.
As close as white on grains of rice,
~ I will bond with you.
As bright as beaming solar rays,
~ I will shine for you.
As fresh as daisies in a field,
~ I will be pure for you.
As loyal as a turtledove,
~ I will be true to you.
As soft as warm duckling down,
~ I will cozy up with you.
As colorful as rainbow light,
~ I will glow for you.
As piquant as a Cajun spice,
~ I will make love with you.
As birdsong of the early morn,
~ I will sing for you.
As sweet as summer berry wine,
~ I will kiss the lips of you.
As strong as the mightiest oak,
~ I will grow with you.
As playful as a river otter,
~ I will cavort with you.
As gentle as a newborn lamb,
~ I will be kind to you.
As our nation’s flag does fly,
~ I will honor you.
As delicate as a feather’s touch,
~ I will caress the all of you.
As enduring as the rock of ages,
~ I will remain with you.
As salt is to the ocean’s water,
~ I will be a part of you.

~*~

Together and forever
~ It will be me and you.


Love is the unifying force which integrates
one’s soul with that of another.
~ Linda L. Dowd

© Copyright 2007 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
MegMeg
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1 posted 2007-06-12 12:49 PM


aww... what a beautiful poem of love. very lovely
RogueandPoet
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2 posted 2007-06-12 01:10 PM


Honestly one of the finest poems I've ever read. Just perfect.
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3 posted 2007-06-12 01:32 PM


only an angel could write this.
i have said these things once a long time ago, and i still stand by these words you have wrote.
very beautiful,
bernie

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Bernie Slicker

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4 posted 2007-06-12 02:48 PM


so good and good. romantic and love.

Brownings would come to applaud for you.

beauty, beauty.

have a wonderful day,  dear lady.

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5 posted 2007-06-12 04:25 PM


Beautiful, Linda!  Love demands so much but then again, when in love, so much is freely given.  
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6 posted 2007-06-12 06:23 PM


Here is the true Linda writing her lovely poetry and this is very lovely...thank you for it..

Goldenrose.

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

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7 posted 2007-06-12 06:26 PM


Like a beautiful flow of silk...James
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8 posted 2007-06-12 09:43 PM


perfectly romantic!
JL
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9 posted 2007-06-12 10:03 PM


Melting hearts everywhere...
EA, this is beautiful.

JL


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~Thomas Jefferson


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10 posted 2007-06-12 11:30 PM


Hi sweet Linda....A vow spoken such, should be wedded in a ceremony that lasts.  
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11 posted 2007-06-13 12:41 PM


Linda, this is so beautiful.
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12 posted 2007-06-19 03:33 PM


Linda,

First, I hope that this particular poem is found and shared with millions.  What a wedding prayer!

Secondly...

Thanks!     You know!


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13 posted 2007-06-19 06:04 PM


MegMeg ~

Thank you, MM. I love love!

Love & Life & Light,

EA

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14 posted 2007-06-19 06:06 PM


R & P ~

Thank you so much for saying so! That was very kind of you!


EA

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15 posted 2007-06-19 06:07 PM


Bernie ~

Then you must be an angel, yourself!

Lovin' hug,
Linda

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16 posted 2007-06-19 06:09 PM


Drauntz ~

You're a pet. I smiled at the flattering "Brownings" comment. Thank you!

Hugs with love,

EA

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17 posted 2007-06-19 06:11 PM


Bunches of Honey ~

Hi, Honey! Yes, my love is freely given! If I were to charge, I'd have my proverbial wings clipped! lol

Loving hug,
Linda

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18 posted 2007-06-19 06:12 PM


Goldenrose ~

Greetings! So nice to hear from you! I appreciate your sweet show of appreciation!


Linda

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19 posted 2007-06-19 06:13 PM


James ~

I like how you put that! How poetic! Thank you, Island Man!

Light 'n Love,
Linda

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20 posted 2007-06-19 06:15 PM


Dixie ~

Aw, yes. Like yourself, I am a romantic at

Lovin' hug,

Linda

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21 posted 2007-06-19 06:16 PM


JL ~

Aw, shuckums, dems perdy werds, Texas Man!

Sending a big hug-o-love yer way!

EA

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22 posted 2007-06-19 06:19 PM


Martie ~

Hmmm, perhaps if I were to ever marry again, my vows would already have been written! lol

Giving you a loving hug,

Linda


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23 posted 2007-06-19 06:20 PM


Smartest Chick ~

Thank you, my sweet friend!

Love, Life, & Light,

Linda

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24 posted 2007-06-19 06:24 PM


Sunshine ~

"Millions", you say?!? ~ I could not help but see $$$ signs before my eyes! lol

Thank you for the vote of confidence!

You're a sweetie!

Loving hug,
Linda

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25 posted 2007-06-20 04:50 PM


This is beautiful.  I am a wedding coordinator by profession and see these types of poems often.  This one is by far superior to most that I have read.  Kudos to you!  Just beautiful.
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26 posted 2007-06-20 07:38 PM


If I ever marry again .. maybe I'll ask you to write my vows.  This is a gorgeous heartsong, Linda .. absolutely beautiful

Sheli

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27 posted 2007-06-21 07:43 AM


Hope333 ~

Hi, there! Welcome aboard the PiP Ship! It is so nice to make your acquaintance! A professional wedding organizer, you say!?! ~ Where were you when I needed you? lol
Thank you for your lovely comments. They were much appreciated.

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

EA

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28 posted 2007-06-21 07:47 AM


Divine Chaotic One ~

Good morning, Sheli. Thank you so much for the "gorgeous" response to my poetic efforts.

Like yourself, if I ever get married again, I would like to have personal vows as well. Perhaps I'd use these! lol

Hugs to you!

EA

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29 posted 2007-06-23 05:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I absolutely love this, dearest friend, I absolutely believe love is the universal language, as it can be not only seen or heard, but felt, among all the little wonders and blessings of our natural world, from the daisies in a field to, yes, even the cayenne in a Cajun spice, LOL, and that is just one of the greatest beauties of poetry; to cross-pollinate the world with the love that blossoms in all of the world's natural bounty, yay! (sigh) Bless you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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30 posted 2007-06-24 08:31 AM


Good morning, Nice Noah! You write the sweetest and most entertaining replies! Each one is a delight to read.

As for my speaking the "Universal language", I'm rather impressed with the language you use in your writing!

Love to you, Angel Man,

EA

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