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Unshared laughter |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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Gone went the rays of the summer days replaced with frowns that only your smiles could replace away went the laughter and the glances we shared the sound of your voice though still fills the air the wind carried away the stars out of the night sky the moon disappeared and the milky way echoed your cry now the hole in my heart isn't empty I know because nothing that's empty could be so heavy to hold ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that last verse really got me  |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
so real...each verse touched my heart and whispered to my soul..beautifully sad. |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
such a sad, but well written poem. I enjoyed reading it. Dee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you all...this one is pretty special to me. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Angel, I have missed you. This is a poem I enjoyed - I hope it's not about you now. A |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you Aziza, Yes, it is about someone I lost a few years ago, it's just taken this long to put my feelings to pen about it. Take care, Julie ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful...especially the last stanza.... jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...sorry for your loss...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Julie.. this is special! well done! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have been wondering where you've been. Unfortunately, it appears as though you may have been mending a broken heart. "the wind carried away the stars out of the night sky the moon disappeared and the milky way echoed your cry" ~ As sad as though words are, they are very beautiful. Giving you a warm, compassionate hug, EA |
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