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Open Poetry #40

Pathos

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-06-10 02:41 PM

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Crimson leaves—

Two skunks— like chipmunks
Scurrying to the rails

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aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-06-10 04:19 PM

The simplicity of your poetry
always moves me.

Alison

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-11 12:23 PM

I am still thinking about an echo to your "Ellison Bay"

Now here comes another art to the extreme.

beautiful. and quite in a humors way to the title. perfect. everything is perfect here.

the sound, the color, and the characters.

and also reminded me of two cartoons.
one told the story of a skunk and a black cat. another is Disney's'.

I say, it is perfect. I'll think one to echo.
very hard.

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