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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-06-08 05:54 PM


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Just off the dock
Along the shore
On Narragansett Bay

An old man
Sits on a rock
Looking out to sea

When he turns
The ocean tones
Harbor in his eyes

No one knows
At all for sure
Who or what he is


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-06-08 05:57 PM


Nice...James
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-06-08 07:57 PM



Beautiful

a light house? http://www.boatsofri.com/i/Lighthouse1M.jpg
a pelican?
a swan?
a morning mist?
a monk dressing in white?
a dream?
a picture?
A painting?
a rising moon?
April first?
nobody?

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