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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-06-05 11:27 AM


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You are
Just a dream
And not a very good one
At that

There must be
Something about peace
That you don’t like
To come to one
At this late hour

Fortunately
Even the unconsciousness
With a little experience
Can tell the difference
Between a deer and shrew

So go away
With all these
Nocturnal strategies

And the Devil take you
If he will


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-06-05 12:58 PM


I have never been rude to my dreams, good or nightmare. I hatch them into cherries and then enjoy them.

Is Black bird singing this morning?

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-06-05 01:53 PM





shrew's furs
deer's antlers
among MAN's decors

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-06-08 01:54 AM


want to tell what you were truly writing about?
passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-06-08 03:45 PM


I like

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