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RogueandPoet
Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

0 posted 2007-06-08 01:05 PM

From My Patio

Happy tears on morning leaf
   glisten to the rays
   I’m sitting on my patio
   in peaceful disarray.

I sip on fresh brewed coffee
   and I slouch in faux recline
   midst my Snaps and Coral Bells
   and my welcoming Lupines.

I’m in my daily reverie
   and working on a scheme
   of health and wealth for everyone
   who dares to share the dream

For here on my small patio
   I plot to change the world
   with verse and steady meter
   and deft well-chosen words.

Will you join me in my purpose?
   and add a line or two
   come Poet let us share a cup
   we’ve got some work to do.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-06-08 01:10 PM

delightful prose, colors and imagry
thank you

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-06-08 01:22 PM

patios are nice...I think I'll go out on mine

RogueandPoet
Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

3 posted 2007-06-08 01:35 PM

And share a cup?

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-06-08 01:53 PM

wow, this is a truly beautiful one.

"Happy tears on morning leaf
glisten to the rays"
the first verse tells all....

the happy mood..
leaf...nature beauty
dew....hold so many dreams in its reflection
sun..simply means love

what else can come out them beside good poems?

From My Patio
(you made me look over my messy patio)

A pool of blue
among many roses
and other flowers
and unknown trees
chat with the lawn
little fountain
quiet longing for the mountain
not far away
for a bird coming to sing

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2007-06-08 08:20 PM

From here, the edging brick is worn and broken
Lending spire to the gangly timid vine
Thinking over java get go, set to soak in
Some good company that thinks that is just fine

Welcome to Passions

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2007-06-08 08:56 PM

RogueandPoet
Enjoyed the read.

RogueandPoet
Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

7 posted 2007-06-08 10:56 PM

Thank you Drauntz and Diamond for your additions.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

8 posted 2007-06-09 01:41 AM

I love patios. Sharing a cup sounds quite nice right now.

Welcome to Passions.

Kristabell

"You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen

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