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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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0 posted 2007-06-08 01:21 PM

You say tough love is what it is.
You say
I have a problem and I need some help.

But really all I needed was you
at a time in my life where
nothing else mattered...

but you weren't there
and instead of laying shattered

I settled for the one who was.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-08 01:28 PM

Dear Passing, nice poem with feelings,

In this time, "But really all I needed was you"
scares all "average" heart. truly.

enjoyed.

have a wonderful day, lady!!

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-06-08 01:33 PM

you are right my friend

truly you are

I did scare him...sadly

hugs to you

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

3 posted 2007-06-08 02:52 PM

Passing shadows,

Yeah, there you go. You have the right idea.

I like it, short and to the point.

Did you know, there is a Yellow Brick Road in Moundsville, West Virginia?

Bobby

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-06-08 03:29 PM

thanks Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-06-09 02:52 AM

Dixie.. my friend, nice write... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-06-10 10:29 PM

"but you weren't there
and instead of laying shattered

I settled for the one who was."

um hum
read you loud and clear Dixie

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2007-06-12 10:14 PM

very emotive "slice of 'real' life" write!

much applause!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-06-13 04:18 PM

Make the choice that you can live with...James

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

9 posted 2007-06-13 04:34 PM

I can certainly relate to this one, Dixie. Good write - enjoyed!

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

10 posted 2007-06-13 11:15 PM

Nicely done. A pleasure to have read.

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