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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
A misty mountain A shadow shivering under the Sun A misty sky A green-grayish art undone Or my dear summer Are you sick With such a high fever? Do drink some poems To get you back to spring [This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-11-2007 07:43 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 outstanding! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm keeping this series, if you don't mind I love it! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very interesting ‘write’! I especially love ‘imagery’ such as: “A shadow shivering under the Sun” and the ending lines: “…drink some poems To get you back to spring” applause!! |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
I agree, this is great imagery and loved the line about drink some poems. They always bring me back to life. Good write  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Drauntz, this is downright adorable! Your pen spills uniquely creative ink!   EA |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Thank you all. Dear passing, I believe you have more moody things to write and you write better, honestly. DO you feel that summer is too hot for writing poems? |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seasons , mood and reasons , Wonderfully expressed Hope |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely, Drauntz. I am on my way to read the others. A |
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