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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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we learned breathe of secrets under thousands of full moons you said "I love your woman incriminate" and the place we've been brought to "ohhhh, you despicable evil one!"  I shrunk within your arrows of gold we turned to white powder subtle employed a leisure of great ease calling calling "besame mucho" glimmers of sexy skined poems beguiling this unravished bride of manner like the imortal hum of florescent lights you hastened pillowy summer nights licking the tongue of snowberry winters unlocking a maze of loose pleasures you said...while nibbling my ear "naked truth becomes our forbidden sin" violating those laws of intimacies you became my maiden name I your lion's den of iniquity diversions fell within my sphere of life your detail of perfection tasting spice a cap & gown of determination mere mentions of promising trivia in a full wardrobe of fire entirely taken by the artist of adventure such joy of seeing myself in need of you because souls were touching delivering us unto our journey's eye nevermore to want or care in this autumn of our lives... "I can live without you but I don't want to" [This message has been edited by LeeJ (06-08-2007 11:11 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee J, the sap is certainly rising in your sensuous spirit ~ and it gets my own stirring as well. I very much enjoy your evocative pennings.   Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! I agree with EA's assessment. Great write LeeJ.  JL  "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Ms. Molly Bloom, More cool stream of consciousness. OOPS, I mean LeeJ. Bobby |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Linda thanks for looking...you need to write another poem as I need my daily fix of your writing...hint, hint...was that subtle? JL your a peach and a half...thanks hun for taking the time and patience with this ol' bear...  Bobby opps, thinking out loud again,  what can I say...mucho gracias for your humor and eyes |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
I've got to go have a smoke....... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
RogueandPoet have one for me to, it's now 75 days without one |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ I just adore the ALL of this one~ You simply make thoughts come alive with originality~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I love your woman incriminate" oh! I need to do that again! "I love your woman incriminate" dang LeeJ! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear Lee... An intriguing write. I had a question about a certain portion of it, but I think I just didn't have the right color of shades on the morning I read it.  Good job, m'friend. |
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