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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-06-08 06:54 AM



we talked about mornings
how they undress the sky
and leave it hollow handed

and our eyes looked through
at the secrets that shimmer
like water on the thighs

you smiled at my eyes
since they didn't mind him
and knew you had extra room

for another boat at your marina
as long as the seas were rough
you said the calm soothed you

and you really missed the storm songs
___________

Daark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-06-08 08:34 AM


Nothing hollow in the want of this, Sir.



Good morning.


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with you
2 posted 2007-06-08 09:37 AM


"and you really missed the storm songs"


without question

LeeJ
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3 posted 2007-06-08 09:39 AM


you said the calm sooths you

....and it does....

lovely

aziza
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4 posted 2007-06-08 11:29 AM


Even under a muffled day
the storm songs can be heard.

Good, beautiful write
touching inside me.

aziza


passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-06-08 02:25 PM


I miss them too


Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2007-06-08 03:12 PM


Indeed soothing, and indeed missed.  
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2007-06-08 06:06 PM


ms sun, thank you lady friend
__________

suesea, thank you for wearing the water

___________

ms leej, you smile me lady

_____________

donna thank you for the eyes

_________

ms az, pleased to be worn by your mind

__________

ms dixie, you are a blessing thank you

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2007-06-09 02:42 AM


ah... sighs

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

The Lady
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9 posted 2007-06-10 10:16 PM




stranger darlin'
I know I am missing some great storm songs

1slick_lady
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10 posted 2007-06-10 10:43 PM


ahhhhhh the silk storm
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2007-06-11 06:57 AM


ms R&B thank you
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ladyone, ah yes the storms, thanks

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slick one, you do know the seams of them

thank you lady friend

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