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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-06-06 06:56 AM

kanji man teach me the tiger's pillow
give me nights without windows
and hide the bosom of winter behind

lest my craving her taunt temptations
bends the steal of my rails
and splinters my hardness to laughter

vicar of the jade cadence
hold me solemn as your forests
press my face to north winds

and seal my eyes with new moss
lest my passions be unraveled
when her whispers melt my water

and I am face down in her rivering
______________

daark

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-06-06 07:00 AM

For some reason, this sounds
like the tone of bells to me...

deep and resonating...

smiling at you.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2007-06-06 07:03 AM

well read ms sun, thank you

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-06-06 09:20 AM

*sighs*

there is soooo much here that makes me smile...very much enjoyed this D

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-06-06 11:19 AM

and splinters my hardness to laughter

I love this line
and the poem too

Yep, the poem too.

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2007-06-06 05:30 PM

suesea, thank you ms.

___________

ms az, and the poem too, thank you

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

6 posted 2007-06-06 10:40 PM

I hear snow melting
and renewal
and awe
a touch of fear, even

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2007-06-07 06:53 AM

kahlil, the writhe of passage perhaps, thanks

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2007-06-07 07:13 AM

This has a feeling tinged with tough, yet soft all wrapped into one. Very nicely done, sir.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2007-06-09 02:48 AM

oh my Mr Daark... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2007-06-10 10:28 PM

but it makes me sad
stranger darlin'

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