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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-06-06 05:24 PM



My Love Far Away


Sometimes it seems
like my life
is nothing more
than a series
of arrivals
and departures
at the Honolulu
Airport.
My love
far away...


JamesLee
06June
2007



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Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA
1 posted 2007-06-06 06:09 PM


James,

That's a good, poetic description of a life I left about 5 years ago.  

I like it.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-06-07 04:46 PM


Thank you for responding Robert...James
Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
3 posted 2007-06-09 11:32 AM


I know how you  feel.... though I wish I didn't...

Too many goodbyes and never enough hello's...

Neeraja

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-06-09 03:37 PM


Thank you Neeraja...
It wears on you, yes it does...James

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