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another sigh
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another sigh |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
You draw a little girl Wearing a velvet shirt. Telling me in whisper “My favorite color” T‘was new skirt I wore On the day you draw. You stared at the wall Threw me a cold shoulder A party of many pretty girls I hide myself in the corner My tears twirled into smile Cau’s you watched me in the mirror. You chatted with girls And waving out of flirt When you sat beside me You had not much word With misty flushed face You looked at your dirty shoes. Hopeless! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes, indeed! ~ "Another Sigh". I could picture the scene and could feel the emotions. It was as if I were the little girl. So innocent and precious. Lovely penning. Loving hug, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...a sigh indeed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 A fine portrait! |
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