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Open Poetry #40
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Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
Posts 180
0 posted 2007-06-10 01:39 PM


It happened right in front of me
yet I swore it never would.
You pulled down all my defences
and replaced them with you instead.
Now I can only watch
as I am vulnerable, weak and dependent.
I guess that was what you wanted
as you slowly burn my heart
and create a war on all the feelings
that I couldn't keep hidden.
I am a victim to your crime,
and I am powerless to stop
what you have started.
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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-10 08:02 PM

I should write this. shared the same feelings.

the crime....the quagmire, the more one struggles, the deeper one goes.

beautiful.
ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
2 posted 2007-06-10 08:29 PM

enjoyed this poem.  well put.
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