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Bean an Fhir Rua
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Bean an Fhir Rua |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Days are hard Especially at times When hours are long Spent in step To another’s tune Whose song is one You do not care to sing Yet when the sun goes down And the world Closes its weary eyes No one can tell you who To dream of being With in the meadow On the river By the sea . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
This is a very beautiful poem of sorrow. it is romantic. touched my heart, truly. "Days are hard Especially at times When hours are long" one's mood could make a day 89 hours long. "Spent in step To another’s tune Whose song is one You do not care to sing" sad. need a better song or sing better probably. "Yet when the sun goes down And the world Closes its weary eyes No one can tell you who" night...it is the time to face one's heart in the quietness. "To dream of being With in the meadow On the river By the sea" beautiful place but empty of love. sad. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So to speak...James |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. http://www.amazon.com/Water-Well-Chieftains/dp/B00004L8AZ/ref=sr_1_18/102-5575332-8033722?ie=UTF8&s=music&qid=1181168549&sr=1-18 . |
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