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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-06-05 02:36 PM



There must me something,
to make you want me,
my words, my thoughts,
my feelings,

Something still alive,
beating, growing, inside,
the place you keep me,
a hide away chamber,
inside your heart.

You can't fight it,
the feeling is more,
it overcomes all
boundaries set,

Why fight something,
so real, so natural,
that is meant to be?

The heart knows, it
leads to the door,
the door you keep
open, to return.

You truely know,
what you want,
and so do I,

One door has doubt,
the other is sealed,
are you going to stay
with the one who loves you?

or are you going back to the one
you love? someones going to cry when
they know they've lost you,

someones going to thank God above....

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-05 03:01 PM


you are truly gifted on poems of romance. very touching. so very touching.

love all three.

have a wonderful day, dear lady!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-06-05 03:03 PM


Drauntz you have a beautiful day as well Lady!

I just write from within, something I cannot contain and desires to come out, to be expressed on Paper...

Enjoy your wine!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-06-05 03:47 PM


At first I thought doubt and then I thought conflict...love can be unpredictable...not destined to please everyone...but sometimes pleasing the blessed ones...James
Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
4 posted 2007-06-05 04:06 PM


Love is tricky business. Not everyone can get what they want, but if you try sometimes you just might find you get what you need…..Oh dear, did I just quote Mick Jagger?...lol

I liked this =)

"A witty saying prooves nothing" (Voltare)

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