Open Poetry #40 |
Do You.... |
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Do you In a sleepless night think about me Do you while taking a shower think about me Do you during breakfast think about me Do you... Do you… do you... ........ When you make love ....... with someone else ....... think about me ....... ....... Do you even for the tiniest moment... whatever you do wherever you are think about me? Because... because... When I wake up first thing on my mind Is you every step every thought whatever I do wherever I go is you... You... Always you.... [This message has been edited by Neeraja (06-04-2007 12:43 PM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So good. A |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
I enjoyed this, made perfect sense to me. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
one's love poem can tear another's heart. the darkest love. beautiful heart song |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I have been here too ... well said! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
interesting that you would ask.. enjoyed this one |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice range of emotions...James |
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