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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2007-06-04 10:00 AM




Do you
In a sleepless night
think about me
Do you
while taking a shower
think about me
Do you
during breakfast
think about me
Do you...
Do you… do you...
........
When you make love
.......
with someone else
.......
think about me
.......
.......
Do you
even for the tiniest moment...
whatever you do
wherever you are
think about me?

Because... because...

When I wake up
first thing on my mind
Is you
every step
every thought
whatever I do
wherever I go
is you...
You...
Always you....

[This message has been edited by Neeraja (06-04-2007 12:43 PM).]

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-06-04 10:05 AM


So good.

A

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
2 posted 2007-06-04 11:37 AM


I enjoyed this, made perfect sense to me.
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-06-04 12:33 PM


one's love poem can tear another's heart.
the darkest love.

beautiful heart song

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2007-06-05 06:43 AM


yes, I have been here too ... well said! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2007-06-05 06:45 AM


interesting that you would ask..
enjoyed this one

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2007-06-05 03:49 PM


Nice range of emotions...James
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