Unequivocally {for the Pip Ladies}

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-05-31 10:28 AM

She knows the complexities
and embraces this duality

the need for balance
between  mind and spirit;

body and soul...

       to feel complete
          and be in control

to have all inner
inhibitions released
a soul contending

in eternal quest of peace....

She listens to my voice
and hears my plea;

I am not her
       she is not me

          but still,
                  she knows me......

She is there

somewhere

yet remains
beyond my gaze
and she too,
has run this race
through this maze

of life.

I’ve shared her pain
along with her fears
her heart in unison    beating
I hear

I have been her
     and she
has been me…

We have stood wishing upon
the  very same star

wanting,      and wondering
of places afar

remembering journeys
through the black of night ,
recalling paths taken

beseeching the light

bringing us
to where we now are

She has fought those battles,
and has healed the same scars

we are individual,            yet similar
held in the common bond
of striving, and surviving

           we are strong

I am her
and she is me.........

a woman       understanding

unequivocally....

{rp dedicated to the ladies of Pip,
sisters of heart who give
unconditionally with love and support..teachers
one and all sharing their life lessons...
I thank you...}

take my life and let me be
a living prayer My God to thee..A. Krauss

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-05-31 10:46 AM

Brava!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2007-05-31 10:58 AM

Donna dear...I could feel myself among those that appreciate where you've been and where you're going. A lovely journey to be on, isn't it!!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2007-05-31 10:59 AM

Thank You Gentle Spirit,
for your sisterly love and spirit!
We all learn from eachother,
having something to bring to the table of life,
to share and gain from,
wisdom, experiances, etc.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-05-31 11:32 AM

Most excellent dear Donna!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-05-31 11:42 AM

GentleSpirit~

'we are individual, yet similar'

A very lovely heart-share of a write~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-06-01 09:56 PM

"We have stood wishing upon
the very same star"

yes
it's the lodestar gentle Donna
and our wishes are one

thank you for the beauty

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2007-06-02 08:49 PM

Donna...this is just beautiful...perfect!

Thanks for being a sister

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2007-06-04 06:27 AM

Wonderfully written, Donna, and so very, very, true of us all. The "understanding" is a precious gift but sometimes it only comes very late in life as with myself but at least I can say that it came "in time".

Helen

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 2007-06-04 06:58 AM

What a beautiful tribute to a bunch of beautiful souls. Oh, how I know where this comes from. Lovely, just lovely

Ruth

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

10 posted 2007-06-04 08:56 AM

Donna- I might not be one of the ladies at PIP; however, I did find this to be one of the best I have read in a very long while.

Great Job

What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?.
www.myspace.com/mindlesspoet

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2007-06-04 09:36 AM

Donna~

this is one of your very best without question...I love this and how it made me feel connected.

such a keeper!!!!

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

12 posted 2007-06-04 09:53 AM

Thank you for this piece. You deserve a standing ovation. We give unconditional love and the journey is worth it.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

13 posted 2007-06-04 10:19 AM

So lovely - so well-written.

Alison

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

14 posted 2007-06-05 04:27 PM

*bump*

RogueandPoet
Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

15 posted 2007-06-05 05:19 PM

That was really nice. I'm new to this site and delighted to find so many very good Poems and Poets.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

16 posted 2007-06-05 05:32 PM

I have read several times. it is such a heart warning poem and beautiful in its art.
and it is my words too.

love this one truly.

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