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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2007-06-05 01:47 AM



When this love affair has ended...
With my pen I'll pay respect
When my shallow wounds have mended...
I will soberly reflect...
On the things that drew me to you
Reasons that I loved you so
Like...The way your blonde hair glistened green
beneath the dashboard's glow
How...You always had cigarettes
How rightly I was praised
The way your kisses made me dizzy
While in a drunken haze
The simple, daily, routine tasks
that you often couldn't do
How...When I slurred the words "I love you"
You stammered you did too

When you realize it's over...
Please, do not forget the way
We staggered, damp and breathless
on those sticky code orange days

My restless head rest easier
Knowing... Should I thirst to drown...
You would be there right beside me
and we'd pull each other down.

© Copyright 2007 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
aziza
Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-06-05 03:36 AM


I am just breathing this poem in .. have read it three times and keep coming back to it.  Just wanted you to know that.

A

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2007-06-05 04:14 AM


"Did you ever see a lassie
go this way or that way?"

Somehow, I'll bet you did.




and oh yes, I did enjoy. (((((((uriah)))))))))

Robert Jordan
Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA
3 posted 2007-06-05 07:56 PM


Yeah, go for it babe.  Funny one.

Bobby

Joty
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since 2007-05-03
Posts 15
Florida
4 posted 2007-06-05 08:36 PM


Just wow!!!!
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