Open Poetry #40 |
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Preparing To Clutch Straw |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia ![]() |
When this love affair has ended... With my pen I'll pay respect When my shallow wounds have mended... I will soberly reflect... On the things that drew me to you Reasons that I loved you so Like...The way your blonde hair glistened green beneath the dashboard's glow How...You always had cigarettes How rightly I was praised The way your kisses made me dizzy While in a drunken haze The simple, daily, routine tasks that you often couldn't do How...When I slurred the words "I love you" You stammered you did too When you realize it's over... Please, do not forget the way We staggered, damp and breathless on those sticky code orange days My restless head rest easier Knowing... Should I thirst to drown... You would be there right beside me and we'd pull each other down. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am just breathing this poem in .. have read it three times and keep coming back to it. Just wanted you to know that. A |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Did you ever see a lassie go this way or that way?" Somehow, I'll bet you did. ![]() and oh yes, I did enjoy. ![]() |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Yeah, go for it babe. Funny one. Bobby |
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Joty Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 15Florida |
Just wow!!!! |
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