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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-06-03 05:55 PM

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New mown lawn—

Clothespin airplanes
On a string


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2007-06-03 06:08 PM

very nice
aziza
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2 posted 2007-06-04 04:10 AM

I like your style.

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gmcooper
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3 posted 2007-06-04 07:27 AM

Haiku like and very, very nice.
Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-06-05 04:39 PM



old mined land

paintbrushes daydream
at the tip
ladylisa
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5 posted 2007-06-05 09:12 PM

I have never encountered this style before, but I got it and I enjoyed it.  Learned something new, thanks.
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