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Kitsuneartist
New Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 6

0 posted 2007-06-04 03:54 PM

I feel it building up inside
i tried to conceal it
its too late now
its time to reveal it

i act on my impulse
and let it all out
blind to your pain
deaf to your shout

its so horrible
yet it feels so good
hurting you
i'd stop if i could

but its too late
i want you to feel
the monster you created
this power is unreal

im giving you back
all the hurt you did to me
letting all the darkness out
im finally setting it free

you created this monster
its finally unleashed
it feels so good...
to have this burden realised

you went past my limits
you let out my rage
you created the monster
then let it out of its cage

maybe you'll die today
but if you are to survive
the monsters name is rage
and you'll be lucky to stay alive

i must warn you
and my warning you better heed
if you ever hurt me again
next time...will be the last time you bleed

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2007-06-04 04:33 PM

I know the feel of that rage~
I stay out of the dark~ what lies within
the depth of darkness in me is more powerful that than rage~ way I was treated since birth untill now~ up in the rafters, in empty rooms, alone, in fear. the beatings, rapes, dehumanizing. drugged,exploited, but I remain in the light, forgiving, keeping faith, hoping some day to find my real family. thanks kit

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

MindBodySoul
Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 196
NJ

2 posted 2007-06-04 10:34 PM

Welcome to our world of poetry... I know you will enjoy sharing your writing...

Did I mention how dark this poem is... LOL... but it is beautufil in its darkness..

Jen--->MindBodySoul

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2007-06-05 06:47 AM

Welcome... but I'm little scared to say much more in case you hurt me with your words! LOL

Nice venting here

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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