Open Poetry #40 |
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Can't Run Away |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA ![]() |
Stepped over the line, the one of no return. Why did I do it, I have felt the burn. Moments of panic, want to climb back in my shell. Where I am safe, from the burning of my yell. Can't though, don't think I didn't try. Went to the door, but couldn't say goodbye. Something keeping me there, yet for another day. Tried so hard, but I just can't run away. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
must be love. then do not run away. As beautiful as other two enjoyed. |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Very beautiful, gripping as well.This really pulled me in. Thanks for sharing. |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
wow, really beautiful. |
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Kitsuneartist New Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 6 |
Love it. . . |
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chunkstar666 New Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 5 |
desperate and painful |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Thank you all for commenting. There is a pull to loving someone that keeps us there and although some times it is painful it is worth it. To me having the ability to love is a blessing. |
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