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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2007-06-03 02:09 PM





A year ago
my heart broke
into a thousand pieces
Since then
I find myself
crawling on the floor
picking up
piece by piece
up to 999
and then…

Nothing!!!

The last one…
the most important one
is missing...


© Copyright 2007 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2007-06-03 02:10 PM


it's there somewhere...just keep holding on

you've made great progress so far!

good to read you again

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-06-03 03:13 PM


It will be found as you learn to trust and believe again...James
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
3 posted 2007-06-03 06:03 PM


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Neeraja,

This is good
Oddly I thought of Edith Södergran

Again very good

John

.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2007-06-03 10:43 PM


Good poetry.
Caught me with your words.

A

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2007-06-03 11:31 PM


This is one of your best pieces,
ever.


Maybe, even so, it is the missing piece.

Sending love,

K


SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2007-06-04 12:13 PM


I know exactly how you feel.
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
7 posted 2007-06-04 01:46 AM


the lost piece must have the sinoatrial or SA node.

oh sad poem. one found the heart but lost the beat.

poem of sad romance.


Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
8 posted 2007-06-04 02:20 AM


Thanks for all your sweet response... smile... it feels good to be back!

Neeraja

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

9 posted 2007-06-04 09:43 AM


It will find you.  Keep writing!

K

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
10 posted 2007-06-04 11:39 AM


Know this feeling so well, could feel every word.  Wonderful work.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
11 posted 2007-06-05 06:41 AM


First piece of yours I have read ... amazing!
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
12 posted 2007-06-05 06:46 AM


I found the 1st one...it is the other 999 that keep me up late at night..enjoyed
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