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Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2007-06-03 02:09 PM

A year ago
my heart broke
into a thousand pieces
Since then
I find myself
crawling on the floor
picking up
piece by piece
up to 999
and then…

Nothing!!!

The last one…
the most important one
is missing...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-06-03 02:10 PM

it's there somewhere...just keep holding on

you've made great progress so far!

good to read you again

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-06-03 03:13 PM

It will be found as you learn to trust and believe again...James

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2007-06-03 06:03 PM

.

Neeraja,

This is good
Oddly I thought of Edith Södergran

Again very good

John

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aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-06-03 10:43 PM

Good poetry.
Caught me with your words.

A

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2007-06-03 11:31 PM

This is one of your best pieces,
ever.

Maybe, even so, it is the missing piece.

Sending love,

K

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2007-06-04 12:13 PM

I know exactly how you feel.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-06-04 01:46 AM

the lost piece must have the sinoatrial or SA node.

oh sad poem. one found the heart but lost the beat.

poem of sad romance.

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

8 posted 2007-06-04 02:20 AM

Thanks for all your sweet response... smile... it feels good to be back!

Neeraja

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

9 posted 2007-06-04 09:43 AM

It will find you. Keep writing!

K

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

10 posted 2007-06-04 11:39 AM

Know this feeling so well, could feel every word. Wonderful work.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2007-06-05 06:41 AM

First piece of yours I have read ... amazing!
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2007-06-05 06:46 AM

I found the 1st one...it is the other 999 that keep me up late at night..enjoyed

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