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Whispering |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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I whisper your name as I draw rainbows on my thighs and put sunshine around my belly button, so the clouds won't fill my eyes. Just so you know, I'll tell you... I whisper your name a lot, it's become a daily ritual, it seems to hit the spot, and I don't think I'll ever stop whether you ever hear it or not. But I believe someday you will. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
This says so much more than the just the words seen here. It has a real depth of emotions that can be viewed by reading what is behind your well chosen words. wonderful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...a joy to read...James |
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Joty Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 15Florida |
Wow...I can sure relate to that...Good job |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, if I could fix your heartache I would my friend, this was wonderful writing, heartfelt and sad, though a love may be gone, sharing these words has brought us all closer together, you so express what it is that so many feel. Have a wonderful day my friend and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
We all have our daily rituals, and many of us whisper, there is something about whispering that is almost sacred. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie.... I hear you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
someday Dixie he will beautifully done |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
one shall call loud. oh, this is a very alluring poem. good. |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Oh this gave me goosebumps! Amazing write |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate dixie and I also believe someday they will !!! Hugs Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Aw....so sweet! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
PS, You never fail to satisfy and never disappoint. Love it. SG |
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