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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
I would like to unroll a map to the cool cave of your arms, just along the inside of your chest, where your heart echoes, be enveloped in the pink of your skin, know the tendon of your elbows as you sleep and I catch the lifts coming up from your throat - in dreams, or drifting off, or simply turning over, side to side to where you need to be. I'd like to know the moist and delicate features of your breath I'd like to be able to enter in, leave and return again, and hold on fast when you laugh, like walking over a suspension bridge, or sitting near a fire that sends its limbs into skeletal shadows, past something pale, and worn, to lovely. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow! What an entrance! I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this... Huge Welcomes!!! A nice, slow, tantalizing read--I thank you.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a very good romantic poem welcome to this wonderful place of PIP. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Most wonderful wow ... very sensual poem. Welcome. Alison |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
Thanks so much. I appreciate it. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So softly beautiful an entrance to Pip. Absoultely loved this and I will be looking foward to reading more from your pen. Welcome To Passions. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful offering to leave within the pages of blue. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write. JL "The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers." |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
Aren't you nice. Thank you |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! a very delightful, descriptive, romantic, sensual poem! ~ARH J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GM~ Welcome to PiP ... such a wonderful entrance penning to share~ Enjoy your stay in this marvelous circle of poetic friends~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful welcome to the passion looking foward to more of your work |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
Thank you for the reads and comments, as I know there is lot of poetry here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gmcooper A good entrance to PIP, enjoyed the read. |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
Seymour T, Thank you I usually write a few poems a month. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"like walking over a suspension bridge" Gorgeous! Nice swaying movement in this write! Love often finds us on a suspension bridge. welcome to Passions. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very descriptive and well written welcome to Passions! |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
Thank you! Someone else loves the bridge scene! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky sensual...James |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
James, thanks! glad you had a chance to come by. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A most refreshing and satisfying read. Welcome to Passions! |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
This Diamond, thank you for reading this |
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