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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Miscellaneous Words I am at a loss, for time is ticking the strength weakens... fortitude, just a wall of attitude creating a new portfolio of the unknown. Yesterday, the world was mine. Today, patience is my only greeting with the morning and its beauty to sustain. Too calm, a storm brewing as I drown in thoughts having to dance in another's shoes. I lose the Lady when the little girl cries out for comfort, for reassurance, for something to grasp onto to be able to keep above the water that continues to mind-rise when alone... and waiting. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
Wynter, what a gorgeous name. The little girl cries out in all us women. We take her shopping, caress her and learn to allow her to grow. I adore this thought process. Thank you for the journey into your private world. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the Lady will come around again  this is a write I can surely relate to |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
an intimate, very 'real', emotive, and fine 'write' [MUCH of which I can directly relate to (even though I am obviously 'male')] much applause! |
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