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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-05-30 01:21 PM

Graze Of Your Hand

A pearl rests, dangling serpentine secrets that honor spills
Rising and falling in shudder breaths ‘tween moonlight hills
Glossary of fate and fable, moan the touch of music, linger clings

Velvet passages embark of knead, slipped away in midnight plead
Rising and falling, commission of stalling stars, cascade in flowing deed
Set upon the deep blue night, a pearl submits in radiant light

Along the meander of tan lines, so gold the warmth of day
Wishes made and wishes heard aglow the words on twilight play
Hear the sighs in talkative eyes, as lips in blossom form

Before the damp on petals raised to please the tickle of the morn
A pearl to dance beneath the subtle stroke of love’s adorn

Copyright Kkh 5/30/07

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-05-30 01:39 PM

what a pretty picture you paint here

and I adore those last two lines!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-05-30 04:49 PM

"Along the meander of tan lines, so gold the warmth of day
Wishes made and wishes heard aglow the words on twilight play
Hear the sighs in talkative eyes, as lips in blossom form"

Absolutely amazing words you put together, and I agree, a beautiful portrait.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2007-05-30 06:11 PM

enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2007-05-30 06:15 PM

absolutely beautiful writing!!!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2007-05-30 08:49 PM

I've been waiting all day to savor this (bad connection earlier) and as always I am mesmerized by the beauty of the visuals.

But not so much that I don't see the intricate, yet delicate construction that you make seem so fluid and easy...hmmm, is this a form, and if so, would you mind educating me?

I'm more than impressed with your artistry--I am intrigued.

Wonderful writing, Kathleen.

I pray all is well with you and yours, too.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2007-05-30 10:19 PM

A delight, as always!

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