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I Miss Your Breeze
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I Miss Your Breeze |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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I Miss Your Breeze I miss your breeze the gentle way wind flowed around my body as you slept the warmth of your hand circling my waist in dream club just being there was temptation stomach skin grazing my back your knees safely behind mine oh how now, I miss your breeze “but I'm so hard to handle I'm selfish and I'm sad”…Joni Mitchell |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Wonderful write. I have missed the same in my life. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"stomach skin grazing my back your knees safely behind mine" Helen how real and poetic love it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lovely feeling I remember though it's been a long time now I suppose one never forgets things like that and never stops missing them |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Yes, of all the things I have lost, I miss human touch the most. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this 'write' is superbly 'real' and very, very good! sustained applause!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very beautiful one. poem of love. love? yes, love. we all miss the beautiful thing. enjoyed as always. |
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