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Open Poetry #40

Seeing clearly

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

0 posted 2007-05-28 03:57 PM

Sad to see
that it's not just me
who controls the rhymth of your soul,
that leads you to love
in a way that is unique.
Sad to see
that it's not just me
who can guard you
envision your needs
and be the beat behind your heart.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-29 12:00 PM

a sad poem of love. We all want to have a absolute occupation of the heart...yes, we do. no matter what, we do. and this is biologically right. sad.

enjoyed.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-05-29 02:01 PM

Yes, it is a sad poem, Jenna, but just remember that what you do is unique to you and cannot be emulated by another. If another is the beat behind his heart, it is just a different beat and should not in any way make you feel inferior.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-05-29 05:37 PM

But good to be able to see clearly and to understand the situation...James

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