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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. It is a far way From the mouth of a cave Just beyond The lace curtained Picture window Little birds are pecking seeds Out of a feeder hung from a tree This morning’s first light Dapples the floor The summer flowers Clothes strewn on a chair And still This is how It might have been When man then became More than just another beast The breath Of that somehow Special someone Being the breeze As changed The world for him Bringing beauty Into his heart . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and beautiful. You have so many pretty pictures which inspires you out much more pretty poems. enjoyed happily. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'time-connected' impressionistic imagery! [enjoyed this 'write'!] Applause!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Beautiful words. Lucky you are. Kristabell "You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen |
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