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Open Poetry #40
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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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0 posted 2007-05-26 12:50 PM



A bird
Of blue color
On spring Forsythias
Arching down over a quiet ford
Singing to the little fish crossing the clouds
Napping around the beaming sun
Wonders why in the sky
Sits wings folded
A bird

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-05-26 02:39 PM


both poems are quite lovely!

love the style!

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2007-05-27 07:56 AM


A wonderful view of the microcosm of nature showing just how much you notice and love it - as I do.  Thank you for the pleasure it brought me.

- Owl


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