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Sunshine
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0 posted 2007-05-15 02:29 PM



How The World May Be Changed


Before you hang me, know this:
I have no agenda.
Before you distrust me, know this:
I have no support.
Before you read me, know that
I am schooled, then self-educated.
Before you ignore me, know that
I am a human.

Before you stop reading, continue on…

Do not hate me because I choose not to
fall prey to the media who are self-perpetuating;

Do not hate me because I believe in your
rights, and yet in some of your beliefs,
I may disagree, offering conversation;

Do not hate me because I believe in this country;
fought for by our ancestors;

Do not hate me because I believe that any person
who has been elected by the majority
deserves the right to be called
by their privileged title.

Do not hate me because my walls are thin;
nor if my walls are thick.
This is called individualism.

Do not hate me if I desire to believe in
what you cannot see.
This is called spiritualism.

Do not hate me if I spend my earnings
in ways that suit myself.
This is called economics.

Do not listen to me, even if I make sense.
Think for yourself, with something akin
to compassion and understanding.

Do not listen, unless you are pulled into yet
another quagmire, for I would not have you
stone me, if my beliefs are not yet
yours, or yours, mine.  Yet, offer…conversation.

Hate me, if you will, and should,
if I take a life, for no good reason.

For I believe that all beings are not sheep;
I believe that all humankind share a beginning
and an end;
I believe that a rule must exist,
or we shall all be destroyed;
I believe that humankind can co-exist,
as do men and women, even
through argument…

I believe in a force, a God, a being….
because it gives credence to some type
of an established order,
and that such stability is for the good of all,
providing everyone a voice.  

It is, to me, too simple.
  
That is why I will not exist
beyond the time when the sun
is struck by your rock,
ignored by your beliefs,
deprived by your intellect,
or even called … depraved.  

For I believe in the good of You…
in some deep knowledge that what you know,
what you were taught, could be wrong, or right.
And I allow as to that acceptance,
knowing that you live to breathe
for some reason
outside my ken.

This, I know, and in this, I believe.


" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

© Copyright 2007 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-05-15 02:49 PM


AMEN lady and well said....


Krawdad
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2 posted 2007-05-15 03:32 PM


Conversation, indeed!

There just aren't enough caves
to go around any more.

Enjoyed.

Startime55
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3 posted 2007-05-15 03:39 PM


BRAVO!!!..such a simple message that pulls one in as they read and makes their head nod in total agreement...Brilliant...I love it...*Big Hugs*

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-05-15 05:56 PM


Fabulous...James
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-15 06:55 PM


"don't hate me"

I say... do whatever you want based on your believe and let the "hate" come...no way to control other people's thinking.

enjoyed the poem

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2007-05-15 06:56 PM


Dear friend,
This is one of those poems I can easily see being placed on e-mail lists and sent around the world. Such truer words have never been spoken
Ruth

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

JaySea
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7 posted 2007-05-15 09:58 PM


Such a challenge to live the humane life in the unhumane world.  When we communicate, we love,  when we love, we connect, and there is PEACE.

Blessings
Joseph

Martie
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8 posted 2007-05-16 12:35 PM


Sissie...In this kind of opening of heart and mind, is good for everyone.  It multiplies even as you write it.  
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9 posted 2007-05-16 12:54 PM


Kari darling heart, Oh my what an incredible piece darling one. Jean-Jacques Rousseau, 1712-1178 , French philosopher, writer, and political theorist whose treatises and novels inspired the leaders of the French Revolution and the Romantic generation. Believed that man was born good and was corrupted by society, check out his Discourse on the origin of inequality, if you really want to understand what he was most famous for. It seems to me that you’ve written a pretty good discourse yourself, tell me darling one are you taking Philosophy?

A stunning piece, with much thought provoking material.

You just know I love your writing don’t you?
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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10 posted 2007-05-16 01:48 AM


Yes to what you said.

And said very, very well -

Thank you.

A

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11 posted 2007-05-16 04:57 AM


bless you for this
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12 posted 2007-05-16 09:03 AM


MammaK?                                                                                                                                      
  


I've seen the paintings in the air
brushed by the hand of God~ Lonestar

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13 posted 2007-05-16 10:32 AM


And, you know what? I believe that we are all intitled to our own belifs.
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14 posted 2007-05-16 11:01 AM


   Thought provoking as well as uplifting.

              MoonShadow
.

LeeJ
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15 posted 2007-05-16 11:05 AM


had to come back for another read...

I loved this

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16 posted 2007-05-16 12:14 PM


Karilea, I agree wholeheartedly!!
It seems some people are never open to
anothers thoughts and beliefs. If not their
own, they are close-minded. I am so glad we
are from a free country that allows for
our own thoughts and convictions.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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17 posted 2007-05-16 01:49 PM


SIL, the keys to harmony here.  I agree that this would make a good mass email!   ....jo
Bridget Shenachie
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18 posted 2007-05-17 12:30 PM


Nothing like discussion, understanding and acceptance of the other-minded to grow in spirit and help create a better world.  Just like you said!

Love You Much!
Shenachie

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19 posted 2007-05-22 12:10 PM


Do not listen to me, even if I make sense.
Think for yourself, with something akin
to compassion and understanding.

Even in the midst of so many wise words, these shine... if only they were heeded!!!

Excellent write!

paullallady
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20 posted 2007-05-24 08:39 PM


such thought provoking truths, that pull one in and captures their soul.
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21 posted 2007-05-24 08:46 PM


This could be read most anywhere to most
everyone...  Very well said Dear Sun...

OwlSA
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22 posted 2007-05-26 07:50 AM


Whilst I know you didn't really mean this only personally, I just have to say - WHO in all this world, could ever hang, distrust, ignore, stop reading or hate our Karilea!  

This wonderfully inspiring poem is you, Karilea, with your outer and inner beauty, your wisdom, your compassion, your faith in goodness, your optimism and your necessity in our lives!

(I don't want to make light of your poem, but I just have to put in a good word for my good friends, sheep!  It is just a perception that they aren't individuals!  I do, however, realise that you were just using them as an image.  Smiles!)

- Owl


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23 posted 2007-05-27 01:38 AM




"Do not hate me because my walls are thin;
nor if my walls are thick.
This is called individualism."

amazing work Karilea
what does it remind me of

oh yes...
tolerance


Denise
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24 posted 2007-05-27 10:26 AM


If true tolerance existed the world would change. Well written, Karilea.
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