Open Poetry #40 |
Picnic with my Mom - now with pics |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
My mom is ninety five and just stopped driving She sold her car only few months ago To compensate the loss of independence Once in a while I ring her up and say "We go" She's getting all dressed up like a young maiden She may be old, but she is still coquette Her device: a lady always stays a lady She's changing outfits a few times I'll bet Around the clock of ten I'll pick her up And she is waving all her friends goodbye We set off towards the Belgium border The sun is shining bright in a blue sky One hour and we'll drive around in France We take a break and order a "café au lait" I drink hot choclate with a dot of cream And we smile because the moment is "parfait" I drive a van, a big one, sitting high And she's enjoying all that lovely scenery On small roads I hope for non oncoming traffic As I will getting stuck in all that greenery I have a cooling box, which is filled with goodies And when it's time, we look for a nice place I put her in her wheelchair and we picnic I'm taking pictures of my old mom's happy face Last time I found a place at a nice river It was too cold and windy to sit outside She stayed in and while she ate her lunch I tried to catch a fish in this water wide Then we'll drive the little roads back home We pass memorials from World War two She says "such a shame that so many had to die Giving their lifes for my freedom and that of you" And that is why I love to take my mom On those picnics every other week We share thoughts and often humor too I think my mom of ninety five is just unique Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (05-26-2007 02:47 AM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so nice a poem to write love between mother and child. Once on airplane a woman of 75 sat beside me and told that she was going to visit her baby. seeing my puzzled face, she said " oh, my son who is 50 years old but still my baby." What a loving mother. A loving daughter too. thank you for the sharing. a beautiful poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ My dearest friend ... you KNOW that I wish I was right there with you and Muys~ If wishing could make it so ... poof, I'd be right there in a heartbeat~ Send photos, okay ? PURTY PLEASE~ Give Muys a gentle *HUGLET* from me and from the grandie girlies~ I miss her in my mailbox .. but try to send her something weekly~ Thank you for taking the time to read them to her~ LOVE YOU, MUYS~ Love you, Titia~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm picturing you and Mom Muys on a summer day... Catching FISH!! Give her hugs from me as well - A beautiful poem, Titia.. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Titia, How lovely. Please give your mom my love. I miss not seeing her writings on the boards. Peace. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Such special times to spend with your mom. Give your mom a hug for me, too. Okay? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My goodness ... look at that Momma Muys SMILE~ Titia~ You two are quite the pair .. what love~ Thank you dear lady for sharing the photos~ I LOVE being able to reach out and touch you both from so far away ... brings you close to my heart~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
way cool |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sweetheart, you give a bushel of knuffles to Mummy Muys for all of us...and while you're catching fish, I'll whisk up the batter! Hugs to you both! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Titia, what a wonderful surprise today, seeing both of you here...and reading your words. I hope I look as "young" as your mom does when I am over 90. M |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks to all of you for the lovely comments. I'm enjoying these tours as much as she does. Let's hope we can continue making them for a long time. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful tales of Mother and Daughter...James |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
This is a beautiful pressentation. I just enjoyed it so much. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yep, Mommy Muys is unique for sure....and so is her daughter! Thanks for the pics and the update on Mommy. She is daily in the prayers of many here, I'm sure....she is certainly in mine. Knuffels, my Dutchie! |
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Forever in Love Junior Member
since 2007-05-31
Posts 24 |
This is such a great poem |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Truly enjoyed your poem and the pictures, Titia. Big hugs to your wonderful Mom Muys, who looks great. I'd say she is an example of how life can still bring joy - auch im hohen Alter! Because you both care. Thank you! Love, Margherita |
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