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trey_c
Junior Member
since 2007-05-24
Posts 12


0 posted 2007-05-25 09:10 AM


I don't want to be a Hippie...

I don't like Marajuanah.

And besides...

How can i expect the world
to find peace -

When i can't even find it
Within myself?

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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-05-25 11:05 AM


I think I understand.

Just find someone to love, and love ‘um till it hurts,
then love ‘um some more and that peace thing will be right there,
right in the middle of your heart.

Nice write.
JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-05-25 11:19 AM


ohhh, don't listen to the guy above me...


wonderful poem, great concept...loved the humor

if your in harmony with self...all else will work out...

Hippies weren't really cool anyway...

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