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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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tiptoe shadow hounds with heads down they follow the light of scent left by some evening moonfoot before the sea's tips sipped savor and melted her butter there between the yawn of night and tomorrow's dawning epitome I hear their howling echos now in the blue bowel hollow neath the sycamore's camphor and the rain sound finger prints on tin can slabs of granite with hand hold grooves to gallop across the names of sleeping gypsies _____________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 ...just becauseM |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Not only have you returned home to us again big daddy, you have brought back the view of mornings as seen through the windows of your soul. Lovely this, D. Yes, I do like it, very much.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
come er  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love this one. it's so great to get to read you again.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
'bout time you got your back in here |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
hey stranger  My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nakdthoughts Thank you ms MMs for the touch ___________ Gentle Spirit Ms GS, as always you smile me, thank you ms ____________ LeeJ, and if I did would you say stay? thanks lady friend ____________ SEA Thanks Suesea for being in the shadow places ____________ 1slick_lady your smooth slick stirs my smile sides always, thank you ms _______________ MGROVES Thank you MS Groves, my pleasure to be touchable again. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
smiles |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and oatmeal too, thanks ms az |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
stranger darlin' I hear their howling echos too you been gone way too long |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear DS...how word blessed you are. |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Your words amaze me and cause me to think deeper than the surface. I really enjoy the way you write, looking forward to reading more of your work. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady one, thank you my friend for the cocoa soot candy. ____________ MS Martie, thank you lil neighbor ______________ MsLisa, thank you for the touch and the eyes |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful, just wonderful Mr Daark... did I tell you I have missed you? RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanx ms B...am pleased that you look in |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
This is engaging poetry. Your sense of style and word usage is iimpressive. "rain around fingerprints" is marvelous writing. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you gm, thank you much |
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